Target Audience and Their View of Our Piece

Feeling that we have almost finished our piece (with only music and some titling to complete), we have asked some members of our target audience of their view and how we should improve it.

Many of the comments we received were positive, but as always, there was some room for improvement. There were a few issues with sound transition and distortion as we moved from and exterior shot to an interior shot. Some shots were too long or slightly out of focus. There were also a few other little bits to correct and amend.

In the rest of our remaining time, we will work on the comments presented to us by the target audience before showing it to them again. This will allow us to gather final comments and make final additions.